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Not bad bro!

I like the name :D

You did pretty good for a first attempt at tribal/dance, but Im afraid I noticed some important points I think you should fix, I know this track is intended to be short, so no complains about that.

First of all, the bongos are panned totally to the left or right (higher bongo to the left and lower to the right) imo you should fix that cause it gets really annoying after a while, specially if you listen to it with headphones ^^'

Second, the bongo pattern was catchy and good but it could definitely use some variations, try making cool combinations, everything is about rhythm here ; )

Finally (and this is from just my point of view) I seriously think the melody did not fit at all with the whole ambiance you set at the beginning, it was to....cheesy to put it that way, besides the chord sequence you choose is really overused, so imo, change that melody, change the chord progression and probably change the lead also (something more smooth would come really nice for this piece ;D).

Those were the 3 important flaws I notice, but dont get me wrong, the project is really good, the kick was perfect! Well actually all the drums you used sound great :D The bass was also very well mixed, there was no clippin', good mastering....yeah! Its pretty good, but Im sure you can do betta =D

Keep it up man! And if you make some modifications to this, feel free to PM or if you want add me on msn, you can find it on my account or in the Audio Artists E-mails thread ^_-

Peace brother

NeonProject responds:

Sorry for taking so long to reply. ><

I kinda wanted the pan to be ther, but hearing it back, I can now understand why it gets so annoying.
I feel that I could do a lot more with those drums, but time was a restricting factor. :/ I may redo it some time.
It was basically something quick I made for a collab, I will take these points in when I come to do the final version, but nearly all my collab work is never developed further until I do the full mix. :/

WOW!!! Well done!

Great job man! Very original dance tune, perfect comvination between videogame and dance :D

This could really become one of the new NG classics!

Overall: Great mixing, good mastering, the gabber part around 1:53 was a lil bit off for my taste but still decent. I give this a 9.5/10 and a 5/5 ; )

Well done!

Peace bro

NeonProject responds:

That means so much!
Thanks For the review, I understand which bit your reffering to, it's the bit which is a bit Hardstyley? I'll be sure not to include that in my next project.

I don't see it as an NG classic... I'm not that good. >.>

Well done bro!

One's again: Most Improved Artist Of 2008! You have just claimed your tittle with this song man ; )

Good job on fixing that bass! The piano is still a lil bit quiet at some points, nahh but its fine, it gives the song a very peaceful feeling ^^

And the drums! Perfectly mixed and mastered, very clean percussion, RESPECT!

Dang I just love the tune you put on the second chorus, right at 4:32...its just breathtaking!

Beautiful song brother!

Good luck on the contest :D

Peace!

Mich responds:

Once again, Thank you :D
I don't think I would quite deserve that title without this song tbh :) This shows of how much I have really improved.

Thanks for giving me tips and comments when it wasn't finished yet.

And thanks for the review, enjoying, and so on ^_^

WHOA!

HOLY MOTHER GOD!!! I cant believe I never heard this one from you, its probably your greatest accomplishment to date! (Although maybe Im wrong and you already made something even better :P)

But anyways, as I was saying, this is great, I never expected someone would remix "Paradise On Earth" into such a good, quality trance song, you're definitely the best trance producer on newgrounds, much respect Karco!

Peace brotha!

Karco responds:

The Instrumental #4 remix is probably the best contender to beating this track, in my opinion it does. :D

Thanks for the kind words and the review ZooSafari!

Im in love with this one ^^,

That was beautiful bro! Im digging your style, brilliant tune!

You're very talented! Nuff said ^^,

Make more like this :D

Peace bro!

Soundshifter responds:

thank you very much :) i'd like to make world music more often, but it's quite hard.

Really good! :D

This song is awesome man! I started dancing as soon as the groove dropped in! Everything is great, mastering is pretty good, maybe the only thing it needs is a nice funky/groovy bass playing in the background, that would help this song a lot ; )

Haha this song reminded me of the good ol' song Washing Up by Thomas Anderson, great house track, you should listen to it, maybe you'll get some ideas to finish this ; )

Peace my brother, your doing great!

sonicxtreme responds:

yeah the bass sux a bit..bt hey still a wip sooo i got plenty of time to show ya improvements...thanks man...peace

True talent!

Dang man, in songs like this is where you show your real talent, love and passion for piano and for music of course :,)

Very nice and beautiful solo man!

Oh and btw sorry for not answering you previews PMs, its just Ive been so busy lately that I dont have even time for good old newgrounds haha ^^

Great work!

Peace bro...

mjattie responds:

Oh it's not bad :) You only have to review if you want to/ can. True talent lol, I'm honoured XD

thanks and I'm glad you like it :)

Awesome 0.0!!!

Man! I wish I was able to make Classic tunes like this! You really know how to put that cinematic feeling on your songs and that is awesome!

PM me when you finish the final product please ^^

Keep it up!

Peace

mjattie responds:

I'll do that, if there is a end product.

Xtreme Is In Da HOUSE!!!

YESZ! I love it man! Cant wait for the final product :D

-Profeccional sound!
-Great percussion <3
-Perfectly mastered ; )
-Great use of FX
-Cool voices!

This is perfect for a party, Im definitely using it! :P

Keep it up bro!

Peace

sonicxtreme responds:

thanks bro!

Sounds awesome man!

I cant wait 4 u to finish this! Theres not much I can say (im not really an expert in psytrance) but it sounds really cool to me and mastering is great also!

Good luck with the final product, Im sure it will be awesome!

Peace!

sonicxtreme responds:

thanks bro i owe u one.

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